All Comments on 'Sisters' Secret Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
re: paragraph breask

One thing that would help is the basic rule that when one characters stops talking and another starts, start a new paragraph. Anyone past the age of 10 should know this.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Oh Yes, so nasty and hot - we have to have more details !! Now the other 2 sisters have to tell their secret tales too; its only fair !! Obviously, they all will have to do it before their parents get home in maybe a week ?? All 3 girls will have to go through hot sex with the other pair before their parents arrive back - then maybe Lisa being alone can be the place the other 2 sisters can visit often to have a sex-a-thon event ?? Thank you - great story. Arousing for sure.

Randee1958Randee1958almost 8 years ago
5 cheers for astroblacks

Come on creator: conjure up another winning part 2 . That will mesmerize us like part 1 just did. 5🌟's

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Part 2?

Are you gonna make a part 2?

astroblacksastroblacksover 5 years agoAuthor
Part 2 coming

Will start working on part 2 within the next few days.

Thanks for the feedback.

FutaLover_79FutaLover_79almost 5 years ago
Unsure

Not sure why this has an incest/taboo tag, as there’s none to be found. Maybe there will be a need for it in part two, but it’s mislabeled here.

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