by TallManReinvented
Well done. A good romance is more about character development and story line than about the wham bam, thank you ma'am we find in too many postings.
The story and relationship have so much potential if you keep it going!
A nice beginning. Hope you find your creative juices to extend it to a next chapter in the tale!
It's a true story as it happened in my life too... Some story ends some ends have new beginning too... Keep writing