All Comments on 'Six Degrees Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hmmm

Very nasty characters, she is just a disgusting cum dumpster not worth reading next chapter unless she dies.....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
How convenient. Hubby just happens to overhear a conversation

About his wife cheating. And he has time for the gym but no time for his wife? Right. So if thats the case, then why stay married when he cares so little for his marriage?

ju8streadingju8streadingalmost 7 years ago

melanie and patrick are working different shifts, unlike the rest of the people in this. his time at the gym is while she works. but seems she is fucking around between her shift and his if they are ships passing in the night.

so who has no time for their spouse?

lets see how this actually ends, and where the revenge really hits.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Kind of busy, no? Who's on first?

The justifications and lame plot contrivances makes this a very tedious read. Is there an overall plot in here somewhere? Your own version of a 1,001 Arabian fucks? I will wait to rate the completed work, but there is so little humanity and common decency in this story that at this point if they all died in the same plane crash it would just be funny. And deserved?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
5 To help offset the asshole of LIT!

Annony is a sad fool who needs help, he's insane

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