All Comments on 'Six Degrees Pt. 02'

Nice work. Sorry the usual church ladies didn't appreciate the thought that went into it and the quality execution.

Just some suck and fuck connected by a few meaningless words. Not even good sex scenes. Add to that really unlikable characters and there's nothing entertaining about his mess. Why bother?

Or bedroom roulette does not require much imagination. It is far more common than we want to acknowledge. The consequences though have not been brought into play. Left as is the ride appears to be ticketed for another round. When will the carnival leave town and who is going to be left with pecker in palm? Fun story. 4*

unfinished

Who the he'll is.named Derwin? If there is someone, why?

I lost track of who was partnered w/ who in this story but found a lot of the sex to be the most erotic I've read in quite a while. so kudos.

Too many characters, the readers get lost with who is who & then the original conflict is not even resolved.

You should have named this story "The Rudderless Ship", 2/5