by MeredithEighty8
Fun story that was getting good, but when I got the action, and the narrator described him as uncircumsized, I stopped. No Jewish 26-year-old man from a good Jewish family is uncircumcised. Why make the character Jewish if you want an uncircumsized cock? There's plenty of goy nerds.
Sorry, too basic a mistake for me to even want to continue.
Sorry, thought I had corrected that. Please don't let that mistake deter you from reading and enjoying the story.
The title says it all! Praises to you! Can't wait for chapter two! I love the characters and it would be cool to hear more of Jacob's side. Cammie sounds like me, but I don't think I was mean in high school, definitely did like the jocks though...
Love both of these characters. I want a Jacob in my life! Please continue this story!
Good story, I just find it difficult to believe that a character named Jacob Liebowitz would be uncircumcised.
Good story, but I agree with others, it was a bit laughable to see that someone named Jacob Liebowitz was uncircumcised. I see you thought you'd edited & changed it. I haven't read part 2; you could fix it then by saying he's actually circumcised, you were just mistaken in part 1 while looking at a skin fold.
Otherwise, it's a well-written, hot story.
A big cock cannot be a NERD big clock is big cock and we love them buried deep inside us❤️❤️