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Kiddo1001Kiddo1001over 10 years ago
Not bad, but.........

This could be a great story but it's to disjointed. The chapters are to short to really get into them. Coming out every few days and having to go back and see what was going on, isn't that well received. However, the plot is ok and the male lead is good. Just make the chapters longer so the flow is better.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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