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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Your story parts are too short. You need to get to the point. I like a good backstory, but you are losing your audience.

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I live in Washington state. Aspiring writer, mostly a hobby now. I like off beat humor, weird things, sci-fi, fantasy, horror. Mostly inspired by B-movies, Roger Corman, old school pin-up girls, and Greek and Renaissance sculpture and art.

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