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StanBreyStanBreyalmost 6 years ago

Finally someone that get it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Terrible

There were WAY too many repeated lines. The sentences were very short; you could have combined them. The story didn’t flow very well at all. Go back and keep practicing. I’m not a fan of this one unfortunately.

StanBreyStanBreyalmost 6 years ago

Don't listen to that guy, this needs a sequel. The orgasm denial and reluctance theme is great.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Amazing

This was really a great story I love how reluctant the mother was, please make a sequel!

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I suck at writing. Working hard to improve. I hope I wrote something you enjoyed. What I'm currently working on: Not sure feel free to message me any suggestions.