by Riley196730309
Glad they got out of the (clean) water! Also glad that they quickly got over the awkwardness in the post-coital group discussion. Which turned out to be a pre-coital chat! Still banal, but pleasant! (Damning with faint praise!)
4*
The emotions behind the spontaneity of the sex was crucial. I am glad that both couples are okay. I sounds as if it could have been pretty traumatic after it was over. I hope everyone appreciates each other even more. I like that they ended with each other, proving that their love-making with their spouse is best.
I thought you had a story with a lot more possibilities than a short quip. You had enough meat in what you were trying to do; however I felt like I was left hanging and waiting for more.
We have played with many couples and singles, but the best experiences have always been with friends.
Just as enjoyable as Ch. 01. A quick, fun story.