All Comments on 'Skinny Dipping'

"I walked in deeper, to my knees, to my hips, than to my chest. I could feel my nipples tighten in the cool breeze as I walked turned back to toward the shore."

??? Thre are a couple things here that are difficult.

Later you swim close to him, but he follows you. That's a different sequence. He stays close to you.

Good sense of etorticism here, just a few teaks to flow better.

Nice read, hope there is more

NorthPacific