All Comments on 'Skinny Dipping With My Cousin'

You need to divide your writing into paragraphs. These huge blocks are impossible to follow. There didn't seem to be a plot at all, so why read this, even as a non-erotic story (which is NOT why I go to Literotica). What little I read made no sense. You speak of a nudist resort, but not topless? Ummm, nudists are topless, as well as bottomless. Nude. Understand now?

"her and I stayed in touch..."

Silly, it's "She and I.

"...Another wedding to go to."

Try, "another wedding to attend."

Other posters are correct, your paragraphs are too long.

It's funny, I'm such a grammar nazi in real life, but none of the things the others mentioned bothered me. It was a nice short story, but yeah you should work on the grammar and format that you write your stories. Overall it was a pleasant read for a first timer

Wanted you to fuck. I know because I have had something very very similar happen with my cousin.