All Comments on 'Skys the Limit Ch. 01'

Sorry, but rape and a father forcing himself on his daughter is wrong and not sexy erotic at all. This should be under Non-Consent as I sensed little or no love in your story.

SynnDee, good story and I do see the love in it. Please keep writing

MORE! Great story

Loved it !! They do love each other, no rape, she wanted his cock in her cunt hard and deep and long like I love it with Daddy too!!

there's always a prig in the crowd who misses the points. i did not see the contacts between father and daughter as rape, as both indulged willingly. there are a few improbabilities in the story, and you should check your spelling and sentence structure, but overall, a nice, sexy tale.

great story, the love a daugher does extend to sexual fantesy.

most daughters do wish it is their father when they do it for the first time.

but some never get to realize this fantesy that they long for.

maybe if we let our daughter fulfill this they may not get pg or worse.

I hope you write more and maybe i will write some true stories

Consent and love are two different issues. This story was not about romantic love but there was nothing in the story to suggest a lack of consent.

It was a decent story about lust but it could have been better. Read this sentence: "And that's why Reggie and Sky were heading for Willow Lake to spend a fun filled weekend with his some co-workers and their daughters." That is an example of why almost every author needs an editor. Literotica supplies them for free, so why not take advantage of their availability?

... looking forward to the next chapter. I liked the detail in the early going, but the second half seemed rushed.

you have to read shoguy....that story about well hung dad and daughter is freakin amazing!!!!when i read stories like this,i always rate em against shoguy's ....those are the best

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Those girls were raped! Once they tried to leave they should have been allowed to do so!

Put it in the right category!

Absolutely terrible. Poor grammar, poor language skills, and an awful storyline.

Story line was way to compressed. Pillow fight? To hell with that; let's all fuck . . . .