All Comments on 'Slacker'

But when you tell a story in the First Person, Present Tense (like this one, for instance), it sounds even more like you're making shit up as you go. BIG thumbs down.

I disagree with the first comment. Who reads erotica and looks for a real storyline? I thought the detail was great and it made me super wet. Thumbs up! Please do more of this, you're very good.

Sorry 3smokingguns I didn't read the piece or vote but had to respond to the comment below. Not my thing, not my genre.

You worked hard to get it published however, thank you.

loved you story,.. :o)) was very "got to keep reading" hope there is another part coming !!

Ooh I love teacher/student stories. So naughty and so taboo. Loved it.