All Comments on 'Slave Ch. 11'

Great Slave story!!!! Looking forward to ch12

this is getting amazing n else is in ur pockets share it fast

plzz plzz plzzz more moree

Great story, I’m just wondering why you consistently wrote susy/Susy’s name in lowercase?

this series would end up as totally OTT stupid as this. What was Ch.12 going to be "snuff slave?"

This series just became more cartoonish the longer you kept writing.

I have to commend the writer, I think he did a great job! Obviously you have to take everything with a grain of salt and I think too many people took the story too seriously. It’s just fantasy. The human body can only take so much. It was fun to read and very erotic several times! I’m sorry to see it end so abruptly and that the writer has not posted in several years. But I think we should do a better job of supporting these writers with our comments. After all they are writing these on their free time not getting paid. I hope this writer comes back some day. He has a lot of talent to offer!

I hope the author really got to partake in all the experiences he described here. Maybe that's why he stopped contributing??