All Comments on 'Slave to a Sinful Empire Pt. 04'

When you didn't kill Nathalie last chapter, I thought you might let her escape. Nope. And that's what you did. You are certainly spare nothing to make the evil empire evil. Thought I might vomit trying to get through last chapter. You really ought to up your game on your tags. A warning at the start of chapters wouldn't come amiss. Not sure how I feel about how Annie did Nathalie. Can't help wonder if she might have suffered less if Annie hadn't laid it on so thick. I understand the reasoning you had her use, but the way she did it, smh.

The escape of Annie and reuniting of Simon is good but the impaling of Natalie is still beyond BDSM. If they truly escape I hope your story takes on the true genre and also the other girl is found and all others escape safely that left initially with Annie. It is a shame you have so much brutality in this story as it has a story to it.