All Comments on 'Slave to My Indian Maid Ch. 04'
by spankedboy
- 16 Comments
spankedboyover 7 years agoAuthorgreat to read, and I will share more.
Anonymousalmost 7 years agoThe Rubina angle into this whole scene is fantastic. It is evident she knows everything and yet how she teases Tarek, how Tarek fumbles in embarrassment. And then the punishment carried out by Rashida is as good as it gets. She is an expert in punishing and humiliating Tarek, physically as well mentally! She drains Tarek mentally, makes him confess to everything. Makes him confess his love to her, and keeps on reminding him of his place, reminding him what a wimp he is and at the same time makes sure he knows that she cares for her. This series should never end.
Regards,
Anil
spankedboyalmost 7 years agoAuthorAt this point of the story, I suspected Rubina knew something was going on, but she didn't exactly know what.
Rashida knew exactly how to deal with me. I kept on sinking deeper and deeper into my relation with her, and I didn't even realize just how much control I had given up to her.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI really like this series a lot so far. I just wish you had been more descriptive in the final scenes of Chapters 3 and 4. What was she saying to him as she brought him off with her hand? What kind if noises was he making as she did so? Was he saying anything to her, or was he just babbling incoherently? I just wish the his climax wasn't so rushed. Other than that, the stories are HOT! Good stuff!
Anonymousover 4 years agoI am not a great at writing but one thing I can say is this was a master piece. why ? let me tell you. you explored the paradox (conflict?) of the little maid. Here she accepted that she was a maid but she changed to be a dominatrix and the transition was superbly put tarek baba! I loved this and read it many many times. please continue
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