All Comments on 'Slave to The Mobster's Son'

by KaisFantasy

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I liked it

Got my dick hard and mind stirred, I too like odd pairs so I'm interested to see where this is going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
I like it

Keep writing you have something here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
great new story

I really liked this beginning chapter and can't wait until you develop it more. Was our protagonist tricked into applying for the job by his "friend"? Will he be the exclusive liaison of the boss or will he be shared? Very well written and much more to tell.

sm1982sm1982almost 7 years ago
Very good first posting..

I hope you have more in store for Josh with Lucas..he is a very intriguing character.. What has Josh gotten himself into lol

retro_girl12retro_girl12almost 7 years ago
Daaaammmmnnnnn

Daaaaaammmmmmnnnnn this is good

63lsmith63lsmithalmost 7 years ago
A GOOD READ

As a rule I do not like this kind of story. Like some of the other commenters, I wonder where this will go next. This was an excellent start, hopefully you have more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Super exciting story

Wow what an amazing story, hoping to read more of it I stay hard as a rock the whole time :-)

MyLadyInChainsMyLadyInChainsover 4 years ago
impatient

Can't wait to see what Lucas does to him next.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Very good. Sad that you didn’t write a part 2.

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