All Comments on 'Slave Yoga Ch. 04: Slave Shaming'

This is not BDSM. This is Nonconsent. While the two can occasionally overlap, this is very clearly about non-consensual sexual activity.

It keeps getting better. You are definitely doing your best work!

Never saw Agatha as the villain! Waiting to see what the next chapter brings!

A darker turn to the story but great and exciting as always

Joe, this long story just gets better and better. Already up to part 4 and the suspense keeps building. I anxious to see where you go with this.

I can't wait to see the next chapter. I hope Tracy is enslaved early in the chapter so we can see how she reacts once she truly is a slave.

Excellent story! When can we have the next chapter?

I find myself checking everyday to read about Tracy being

enslaved and branded.

A brilliant story line. I look forward to reading the next instalment.

Although unlike other feedback I hope Tracy isn't enslaved too soon - I am sure there could be more twists and turns yet!

come on joe you cant leave it there! has to be more chapters!

Maybe Tracy finds Suzie nude in a cell Wearing a collar, scared and new brand before or just after Tracy herself finally gets what she's been after. Great Story so far.

Joe, this has been a great story, but haven't heard from you since last November. Are you facing major writer's block? Or is your next chapter gonna make war and peace look like a short story? So wishing something from you , anything would be a treasure. orflash64

This has been a great story so far. Really hoping for more!!!!!

Any chance of updates?

Professor Crush could have both Tracy and Julie shackled to each other, kissing each other and rubbing pussiest hard and harder while bring flogged on back and ass by the slave traders. To keep them in such anxiety will guarantee sale to a lesbians domne who will buy two straight women to humiliate and turn them into submissive lovers to all lesbians who pass on their way.

Nobody writes stories quite like this. Maybe it’s not the most realistic, and the crude comments the girls are subjected to can be too much, but the overall effect at least on me is a kind of firehose of psychological slave conditioning, as the heroines play with fire and you feel the trap closing slowly and inexorably over several chapters. The author’s world where women are always a few stray thoughts away from enslavement is both frightening and enticing, and it makes me wonder if I’d end up enchained and branded in such a world. It’s not for everyone, it’s not perfect, but I love it.

I enjoy BDSM (as a sub) I also enjoy slave fantasies like many sexually active women. I KNOW that this story is a fantasy but this chapter specifically screams everything that is wrong with society slut-shaming women it takes it all to a whole new low. I couldn’t find anything sexy about this chapter at all it just made me want to vomit it’s so fucking warped and sick.

Despite discussing it in the chapter women are portrayed as morons. Everyone turned on the girl including the other girls, human nature, single out the weak and destroy do we really need to focus on how fucking awful humans can be to each other?

Even the only kind of justice available would be for the sociopathic professor to be stripped and enslaved that still isn’t any real justice because it just perpetuates the whole disgusting mess.

You probably think I’m overreacting, it’s only a story right? However, caveats have been made the setting is total immersion women have no rights and are utterly dehumanised. What is generally a good thing in writing works against you in this instance, it’s too believable. Sex Trafficking is real, slavery is still real. You’re writing about sex though, and who doesn’t enjoy sex (not meant as a loaded question), it’s meant to be enjoyed by all involved? In your story you explain that only a small percentage of the slaves become sex slaves but there’s no focus on what the other slaves do, because it’s not fun or sexy.

As a scene in BDSM slavery is smoking hot as a lifetime CHOICE sure if that’s what someone wants why not. The reality of it all is another thing entirely, it’s about as sexy as a nazi concentration camp. I’m really not trying to piss anyone off, your story just got to me on a visceral level, presumably not the one you were aiming for.

Am i the only one who thinks it would have been hotter for Julie not to get enslaved? Stripped, spread, toyed, pushed to the edge and then returned to class with the threat hanging over her head...

Well, I certainly am hating Professor Crush more and more. Her psychological setup and rape of Julie into becoming a slave was disgusting but so perfectly hot. Too bad we did not get to see what happened to Julie but maybe that will come later. Tracy is going to be auctioned off as a slave but hopefully she will be set up as a pleasure slave to some kinder master. Maybe, just maybe, we will see Professor turned into a slave as well. Oh, it would be so fitting.