All Comments on 'Slayer's Wolf'

I'm really liking the feeling of this:) I hope you don't leave your readers hangin. Update soon. Very soon......

9' manhood ... It has to drag about six feet on the ground! Worse than a peacock's tail as a liability! 9" would be impressive enough!

I do love a good were story

I have to say though, you need to do some proofing, although I'm so glad you still had this sentence in there - it's made my weekend!: "Take him to the infirmary and have him given an anecdote and put under 24 hour surveillance until he's stable." Love it!! LOL

I like your story and am going to continue on to the other chapters posted. Thank you for an enjoyable tale so far. I would have given you 5 stars, but only gave you 4 because of the glaringly obvious typos. A little extra proof-reading will go a long way. Happy writing!

Love the story. Looking forward to more.

Badly needs editing - an editor would also help you get rid of all the cliches.

Please note that if you give the size of a guy's dick and the bra size of a woman's boobs, you might as well hang out a sign that says "I'm not a very good writer". Avoid this, and your writing will immediately appear more advanced.

(PLEASE get an editor.)