by SteffiOlsen
Now this is mean that the two brothers are one person, that's why the Argus say she must love both so they can become one? Or in order to break the curse Argus must not find another body?
I hope to have a happy ending but not to have to love two different people.
I kind of want Troi's former Mistress to somehow end up at the castle, and Argus and Talgut are polite to her, but she freaks out when she sees Troi. Then Nivid goes into defense-mode. That probably won't happen, though. Anyway, I like your story. It's pretty nice. It feels original. Also, Nivid is adorable, and I want to pet his head and give him a cookie.
Foreign words are distracting and annoying.
The story itself is otherwise molodets (great). ;p
One reason I loved historical romance when I was a teen was all of the historical information (because the sex parts were just confusing with "flowers & mighty swords"). Be it a foreign word, descriptions of period clothing, or daily activities for the time. So, I'm loving this. I came into it late so it's already finished (like binging on Netflix) & all of the tidbits info is truly a highlight to the read.
I don't find I need translation as I read, but I do appreciate the info once I'm done.
Totally absorbed in the story and believe Troitsa is the most intriguing of your characters you yet have brought to life. So sorry ☹️ about the 4stars, meant to do five but my finger brushed the screen accidentally. Have complained to the site before about the inability of a reader to rectify such a mistake, but have gotten no response. Again my apologies; the story is a 5+ without doubt.
Love the story the detail the premise! You're an intelligent writer with heart ! Can't wait
Or dreading the final chapters !