by trickykick45
"I may be a traitorous scumbag, but I'm not a criminal!"
Really? Sounded like rape to me!
this belongs in erotic couplings not incest just because it was your son's girlfriend she was in now way related to you
ALL MEN ARE BASICALLY EVIL. THAT IS THE VERY REASON THIS EARTH IS GOING TO HELL!!!
granted, this is certainly taboo (tho not incest)...because anytime someone is not in position to give consent, it is considered rape, which is certainly taboo and then some.
I could see how you would stretch this into incest because your son's cock was in her pussy just like yours. I liked the story and yes it was rape but please people, this is erotica!! Grow up and don't read it if you don't like it. Thanks for the story!
Come on people,yes it was non consent and should have been categorized as such,but the outrage in the comments is amusing since we are reading incest stories which by it's very nature are wrong to many. Keep the preaching and moralizing out of the comments especially in this genre.
I enjoyed the story for what it was intended,erotica and not as a political or moral statement. GOOD WORK author.
I wasn't sure myself where to put this story, so I put it in incest/taboo mostly because of the "taboo" part of it. Yes, the story was about a rape, but I am a woman and it's one of my fantasies. Sorry to offend, but I have to agree with the person who said that it's erotica, not political or even moral. Thanks for the compliments to those who gave them :)
I'm not sure about the complaints but I must say, your story got me very hot.
hi trickykick45
great story
don't listen to those comments
rape is forceful and violent.
non concent is when they don't want it.
woman have pussy and if you can get into it it's yours.
I must say that you made a big mistake, when she called your name, I would have answered as I was fucking her.
Mainly because when you are fucking them, they like it.
If they catch you and you just keep fucking and kissing them, they respond to it.
I just tell them I had to have you, and that i wanted to fuck you the moment i laid eyes on you.
Now you would have a brand new tight sperm bank.
good luck next time.
P.S. She knows you fucked her, and the fact she told no one, she'll go again.
great story well written ... I can imagine watching the scene being the gf and being the father ... and don't know what turned me on the most ...
very nice, u described the things very well,. I wish u can get another chance to fuck her. Fuck her harder this time! All the best.
soooooo....he's no criminal- he just rapes a girl. but she's over 18!
yeah, still a crime though.
very obviously written by a woman. great concept but could have used som work both for content and technicalities.
Man I had a great boner while reading this. Fucked my 15 year old daughter a few times when she's been drunk and sleeping. True that your boner is much bigger and when you cum it shoots for ever
I have reread this more than 3 times now. Love the detail. Makes me feel like I'm there. I am female and am really into the sleeping beauty type stuff. Love this story.
You had me until you started degrading the wife for aging lol guess that’s what I get for being a kinkster and a feminist
What's wrong with you folks? I come here to read great erotica while I masturbate and this is one of the best stories that I've cum across. Pun intended. Cheers Richard
I hate that I really like this. I finished before I could finish the story.
Don't understand why anyone would get mad about a fictional erotic story. Don't like it? Skip it. I skip stories that don't interest me all the time. I personally like these types of stories amongst others. You'll get no complaints from me!
This story shouldn't be in this area. It was written okay but there was nothing incestuous about it.
Loves this story! I'm a female and this is one of the better written ones. Would love to read more!