All Comments on 'Sleeping Daughter Ch. 02'

mmmooooorrrrreeeee :(((

Please continue. This could end up one of the better series if taken down the right path. The writing is good and the story will get better as you continue. It got me going and they haven't really done anything yet as far as she is concern.

we need more and quickly please.

Such a tease! More please.

I'm super wet. What's next??

Hope to read the next chapter(s) soon!

What a great story! Definitely looking forward to more!

Great story, I love how the two sides are starting to come together. Keep going please :)

I would love to read more

Very well written first 2 chapters! I hope to read chapter 3 very soon!

Please keep writing :)

Naughtydad469

Got me a little excited with that one lol. Love how the stories are coming together. Really hoping for another chapter soon. I love these kind of Daddy/daughter stories. The ones where they don't just rush into it. The anticipation is like ecstasy. Great job.

i love how the story is going so far. what will happen on the next story.

An annoying place to leave things, and after more than two years it seems unlikely that there will be a third chapter.

I love it so so much please write another

Wish I could be in that situation waking sweet little daughter

Write more

You can!

So Good incestystory

And she is 18 not 10. Not the first time she even got wet so much hotter when you don't try and say they are 18 then write them like they are 10

Hi. Loved the storyline. Shame you didn’t continue.

The discovery Holly is experiencing is perfect. That she encounters Daddy/Daughter incest online, waking her to thoughts of her own father is exhilarating. This has the potential to become a fantastic relationship. Keep it consensual, and loving. I can’t wait for chapter 3.

I can't wait to read what happens next

TBC.......................?

Hope you finish their story one day.

Love some more sleeping play please; very well written.