by Crazeems
in which you told your tale. Totally believable and the characters came to life with the essence for each that was needed. Not too much detail, nor too little, but just enough and in the right places and at the right time to make Danni and Em real and then one could really empathize with them and live the fantasy as one reads it, so to speak. I don't know if it's the english tendency for terseness in speech that helped you or if it's merely the "differentness" from american speech and tone that makes it so delightful, but I read both of your stories and loved them! More, I say! Bravo!
1st, one of your stories that I have read, If the others are even close to this, -- they will be worth reading,!!.
I loved the way the story unfolded, I hope they " meet " again, !!.
"Sleeping with the Boss" has all the elements I enjoy in an erotic story: a plausible plot, likable people, hot sex, and a sense of humor about itself. Both my sets of lips are still smiling.
I found the story both believable and sexy. Very well good and put together.