All Comments on 'Sleepless on the Sofa Ch. 02'

by MoonCorgi

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Really nice premise.

And well done. Great buildup for what will follow in subsequent chapters.

Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great writing

I've been reading more erotica to get into writing it. I've mostly written fiction pieces on fantasy, post-apocalyptic, or horror settings, and I've been studying and drafting a few pieces. But this writing is really good, great job on it all!

soppingwetpantiessoppingwetpantiesover 6 years ago
Gift of gab

You have a gift for witty conversation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
satisfied

very good story mistress, I would like to see more.

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