All Comments on 'Sleepless on the Sofa Ch. 03'

by MoonCorgi

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willowindwillowindover 5 years ago
Lovely

It's nice the way you have gently introduced the characters and made them real. Now things are starting to really heat up, I am keen to read the rest. Hope there will be more by the time I finish what you have done so far.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice premise.

Well written. Well paced. Quite believable.

Five stars.

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