All Comments on 'Sleepover'

Incredibly erotic and sexy. Please give us more about these two delcious creatures!

Well done! Delicious build-up, I hung on every word. Never heard the term "pulling" a girl, but I like it.

Loved the story as is,,, BUT would enjoy it better with a description of their bodies,,,Especially if they have small, pert breast,,,THANK's for a good read,,,

...the comments that precede mine were made by people new to Literotica, if they think your story is so hot. I've read MUCH better, and I've read much worse, but being a so-so writer is not much better than being a terrible writer. I'm happy that you got to experience what you wrote about, but just because you experienced something doesn't mean it should be "put on paper". An inherent sense of writing skills should precede that decision.

Think Before You Pretend To Be A Writer Again,

Me

Ahh, ignore anonymous USA, what does he know? I thought the story rang true and was well told.

i read this story and got so horny.... I was masturbating so hard through the whole story, it is so sexy I want more. I NEED TO BE FUCKED NOW!