All Comments on 'Sleepover at my Best Friend's Ch. 01'

Everything is too abrupt. Flesh it out a little more and you'll be on the way to a good story.

Don't change a thing, just let it continue. Love to see them come out as acouple, and maybe marriage in the future.

I enjoyed it and would love to see more chapters.

I'm planning to do up to 3 parts of this. I'm currently working on part 2, so it might be out sometime soon. :) Thanks for the positive response. Even if you didn't like the story please comment and critisize my first work. I'd love to improve on it!

You really need to follow up on this.

Do you think you will get a chance to finish your 3 part story?