All Comments on 'Slipping Ch. 01: Intoxicated Workouts'

I'm really looking forward to see where this is going. Very well written too!

is gonna be good... SS

Just started reading your story and feel is it fantastic, at least the first chapter :). I love the character development and the foundation you laid in the attraction. My one comment is you left the physical descriptions a little vague and a scene where she was checking out her friends ass in her tight pants as she bent over in some stretch would have been good. Deciding they should do yoga just so she could watch her friends body.

Love the build up and the obvious tension between the pair of them, fabulous story!

Love the teasing