All Comments on 'Slow and Painful Ch. 01'

Right after he removed the cage (it's a toy and an idiot removes it in less than 30 seconds with a pair of pliers) he took the video to a lawyer. The girls ended up in jail and during the Civil suit their parents disowned them and their friends wanted nothing to do with them. The end to a really silly story that never gave a single thought to consequences. No stars.

This was just awful. The characters are all weak, shallow and uninteresting, there wasn't anything sexual or dirty about this, it was a waste of time.

You need to have someone check your grammar and spelling.

hard to find it erotic when someone's getting their face slammed into a mat until their nose bleeds. Also, there's the fact that he's not enjoying it. This is the story of two cruel, heartless girls taking advantage of a guy's timidness with women.

you anonymous bitches are just no fun. This is in the Non-Consent category. The only criticism I have is spelling and grammar, therefore 3 stars. I wish I had a Girl friend as wonderful as Mindy.

And he get the pictures for his beef at the police and the girls get punished very hard!!! Therefore whats that crap for!!! I think you write for perverts or insane reader!!

Again annoy bitches after reading this story. he's the insane and crazy ass MF on here!

Interesting start. Your critics on here amaze me. If they're not into this kinda stuff, what are they reading it for? I doubt they have the intelligence to put two sentences together, let alone write a story!

Holy shit this is perfection. I absolutely love this story.

He goes to the hospital and then to the police, and the two whores go to jail for a very long time. Rarely have I read such a stupid story. It seems to me that your imagination is playing more tricks on you than seems good for your life!

Good Start to a series. I lked the foot sucking..