All Comments on 'Slow and Painful Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
You ever thought of his teeth?

Bite a chunk of her off. She's headed to the hospital. I wonder how she explains that? Teeth marks and his DNA? She's going to jail. This has degenerated into a torture fest. Nothing remotely clever or interesting about the writing. And with truly disgusting characters there's no fun in reading this mess.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Confused

You call him Fred and Greg.

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