All Comments on 'Slow Seduction Ch. 01'

Are you reposing this? Because I've read this story before on here. What makes this story interracial?

Yes it's a repost, and what makes it interracial is later in part 03. Not sure when part 2 will be accepted and posted, they were submitted at the same time. I'm not a writer that always tends to reveal everything at once. I like for my readers to use their imagination until I do. Thanks for your question!

When did the author declare the gender? For most of the story, I assumed the narrator was a guy. And the language felt...disjointed, like run on sentences only with the speakers and not sentences.

Everyone is different. I would hate this to turn out to be something I am not interested in. I will immediately stop reading. Most of us like what we like.

so you read this and couldn't figure out who was the female and who was the male? If not gender was subtly hinted until she spoke of her feature (breast,between her legs, inside her etc) the male was established from the first time she sees him in the hallway and he is referred to as "HE" hope that answers your question :)

Look guys if you want raunchy, overly revealingly, straight to the point,not going to use your imagination, let the writer do the thinking for you material my stories are NOT for you. (I'll be sure to put this in the disclaimer to save everyone time) I really appreciate you all reading I really do. I like what I like and there are others who agree,if you don't , do like me and many others have done. STOP READING or write your own. If you've never submitted on here there are specific ways it must be formatted to be accepted, I had to comply to have it approved which is why some may look like run on sentences etc. if this is not what your referring to (shrug) this is MY style of writing. As of now I will no longer be answering anymore personal writing tiffs you all have with my writing style. But by all means leave as many as you see fit. I'll definitely read them! ( but no answer) any question about the actual story I can answer all you want!

Wait till Part 3? I agree with Anonymous. I need to know now. You should have established this in the first paragraph, I'm investing my time here. If it's a black girl and a white boy, I'll stop reading immediately, but I'll never get that time back

Wow you guys act like these writers owe you something. They don't. They said to stop reading if it isn't your style. EVP I loved it. Keep them coming!! I like using my imagination.