All Comments on 'Slowly but Surely Ch. 01'

I made a couple of errors on the name of the main character (Slade/Sloan). Slade is correct. I've already posted a fix for this and a couple of other typos.

Chapter two has been posted and chapter three is at the editors. There will be four chapters altogether.

Hope you enjoy the story.

Regards, Jake Rivers

Thanks for creating this story and the contest...

Great change of pace. Like the setting and characters cant wait to see where you take us.

Always good to read one of your stories. This is like a Zane Grey Western. Thanks for the invite to the invitation.

Highest regards

DG Hear

A new invitational and another fine story! I don't think you could write a bad one. A good old fashioned western is just plain fun.

Thanks for the effort.

These invitationals generate some great stories by all the authors. Thanks for doing the leg work.

i felt like you tried to tell too much in too little a space. still good though. but not your best.

Excellent start!

Pity that after working for Cap for twelve years and thinking of him like a father that Space never saw in again.

Dang word feeders! Slade!

Beautiful imagery!