All Comments on 'Slowly but Surely Ch. 03'

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DesertPirateDesertPirateover 15 years ago
Just plain good!

This is a fun story and well written. Reminds me of a bit of Grey or L'Amour. Really looking forward to the rest.

bruce22bruce22over 15 years ago
Very Good Story

Nicely structured. For a while there it appeared that we would have a simple romantic story. Now the plot thickened

and the whys and hows will have to be dug out of the woodwork.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great tale

Lookin forward to Ch 4.

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15about 4 years ago

Oops! Roxie got caught.

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