by DaPenguin
Doll, Love this story sooooo much!!',,,,,,Please, please, write more!!! XOXO......pam.
This is a fantastic story line. Love your imagery and writing style. Waiting for the next chapter.
I hope you are going to kep this going! Its a good story, well written and believable; the pace that things are happening at are just right. I look forward to the next dozen, or more, chapters.
He'd fall flat on his face in one inch heels let alone anything taller. This story is a complete train wreck of the implausible followed by the unbelievable.
I really enjoy how this lovely story is progressing. No doubt our protagonist will be a girl sooner or later, most likely sooner. He is on a path to a different & wonderful new life. 💋
Veronica
Your pacing is perfect. Nothing is being overly rushed and he isn’t being thrown into the deep end with 6 inch heels and dressed like a prostitute. I was disappointed that she hooked him up with such a pig that just wanted something to stick his dick into considering she is supposed to be his good friend and you would think that she would look out for him but to get drunk and have no clue what was happening it left it up to him to take care of her that night.