All Comments on 'Slowly Changing Pt. 02'

by DaPenguin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
yes

you are becoming a sexy gurl and you will be her bitch too so hot

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Fabulous !!

Doll, Love this story sooooo much!!',,,,,,Please, please, write more!!! XOXO......pam.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Keep it going

This is a fantastic story line. Love your imagery and writing style. Waiting for the next chapter.

satinshawnasatinshawnaalmost 10 years ago
Great story

Wish I were her roommate.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Enjoyable story

I hope you are going to kep this going! Its a good story, well written and believable; the pace that things are happening at are just right. I look forward to the next dozen, or more, chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
What an idiot

He'd fall flat on his face in one inch heels let alone anything taller. This story is a complete train wreck of the implausible followed by the unbelievable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Actually, it's easier to walk in heels that you might think

Try some!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Gets better and better.

Veronica_E_DayVeronica_E_Dayalmost 2 years ago

I really enjoy how this lovely story is progressing. No doubt our protagonist will be a girl sooner or later, most likely sooner. He is on a path to a different & wonderful new life. 💋

Veronica

AnonymousAnonymous17 days ago

Your pacing is perfect. Nothing is being overly rushed and he isn’t being thrown into the deep end with 6 inch heels and dressed like a prostitute. I was disappointed that she hooked him up with such a pig that just wanted something to stick his dick into considering she is supposed to be his good friend and you would think that she would look out for him but to get drunk and have no clue what was happening it left it up to him to take care of her that night.

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