All Comments on 'Slut Mommie Ch. 17'

Those of us who think this is one of the most erotic stories on this site are finally rewarded with another chapter. Don't make us wait so long before you write another one. Even though there is no incest, "Slut Mommie" is as always very slutty and erotic plus she is the central character. So keep writing more chapters; would not want this story to end anytime soon.

This series is by far the most erotic reading I have ever enjoyed. The rythm and pace you take the reader through causes us to feel each and every erotic sensation that Kate is feeling. Every breath and sexual excitement she feels, we feel with her. You make us want to know her, feel her, and in many instances....become her! Amazing job as always. My only complaint is the tremendous length of time between chapters. PLEASE write more frequently! And absolutely write a book about KATE! A huge fan here!!!

Incredible!

thank you! Type more later!

By far and away the best erotic writer on the internet finally pleases his thousands of fans with another chapter. I have been coming back here two or three times a week for months hoping for an update. Hope things have been ok with you, and please dont stop putting up your stories. they are the best and we do treausre them.

What a story, great addition to the hottest series posted here. To bad she didn't get to fuck the two of them, but what she did was great. Looking forward to family photo night, Hopefully it will end up with a submissive and slutty Kate fucking both her kids while hubby watches and jerks off. Just like her dream. I hope the next chapter posts soon, I've been looking forward to this chapter for a while. Keep up the good work with this series.

How do you do this ? This is the best series in the insest section,hot and juicy.I don't know where kate comes from but you do her well thanks.It's been worth the wait.

cant wait for next chapter

Most of the chapters in this series are great. Kate is quite the slut. I would like to see you do a chapter with Gina in control. Maybe her and some of her friends taking her out and getting her so turned on she can't control herself. Kate did say she was Gina's slut.

Hot story! Looking forward to family photo night, where hopefully she'll push the limits further in front of her husband..

This just keeps getting better and better. I am eagerly waiting for the next part. > When will Kate know what Jason painted on her? > Will there be more incidents (exhibitions) with the Pool Construction men? > It would be nice if Kate could do something drastic for her role as a porn queen >> [Kate expresses her interest to become more versatile and do more 'role-playing' for her website. She wishes to get her hair cut so that she can wear different types of wigs and look all the more unrecognizable. Tim or Jason could take her to the barber to get her hair cropped, so that she can wear different types of wigs. The barber could also shave her pussy and fuck her after that. She would go for regular shaves to the barber. Tommy, Kristy and John will not be aware of the real reason behind her makeover. ]

Thank you for this masterpiece.

I am checking back daily for Chapter 18 and 19.

I am more interested in the secret relationship between Kate, Jason and Tim.

I am also looking forward to something drastic to happen to Kate - Like a haircut & pussy shave at a barber / tattoo / piercing etc.

This is the best series I have ever read. I hope you keep on going and make it at least a 100 chapters. <<<<<<>>>>>>> I also think that Kate should get her hair cut so that it does not block her tits while she gets photographed. You could also develop a relationship between Kate and the hairdresser. She could go to him for getting her pussy groomed.

it was soooooooooooo hot, the whole series is incredible, waiting for more & more chapters, pleeeeeeeeeeease hurry up please, it's so damn hot

Thats a good idea. Jason and Tim could take her to their barber and he could cut her hair and shave/groom her pussy. She becomes a regular customer of the barber. |||| There could also be a situation where the pool workers threaten her to have sex with them.|||| I am just waiting to read about Kate becoming a porn star (without her family's knowledge). I wonder how she will explain her new appearance to her family ?

This is the best series I have come across. Please describe what was painted on Kate's face. Maybe she could be in for a surprise when she sees the photos. Quite a lot of comments about haircuts. It does sound erotic, especially if the barber gets involved. Cheers

I am checking back every day. I just don't get tired reading it. This it really good. I see a lot of comments about involving a barber - this would be a good idea.

Thank you for posting another chapter of this fantastic series. I'm not going to suggest plot to you since I trust you to continue up the fantastic writing. I would like to let you know I enjoy the dynamic between Kate and her daughter. Cheers.

ben

You have created a masterpiece. Please continue. I specially liked this chapter 17. It was fantastic. Opening the possibility for new sexual encounters with the pool men was brilliant. Maybe they could catch a glimpse of Kate in the photo session in the next chapter.

can you write about more ANAL and tommy's friends doing the mom

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter.

This is definitely the best series on Lit erot ica.

Your writing style is the best.

Keep up the style. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. The fact that the son does not know the relationship between his mom and his friends is really exciting.

I was just reading through the comments. The barber & haircut idea seem cool. Maybe her sons friends could take her to get screwed by some bikers, tattoo artists etc. All of this without her family's knowledge

Can't wait for the next chapter

From painted nipple rings hope kate gets real nipple rings. All this without her family's knowledge. Please give us the next chapter. I am really looking forward to it.

Hey fantasy69,

this was a greatone. I sroked my dick so many times, it is sore. I just couldn't stop reading all 17 parts.

u need to get a porno made from this story. it would be great.

bigbuck73

Hi everyone. Sorry for the wait on the next chapter and thanks for leaving all the comments. I have about half of next chapter written but need an editor who can proof read for me. I thought I would give this board a try first before looking anywhere else. If you have the skills and would like to help, shoot me a pm. Thanks. Fantasy

Pleaseeeeeeeee! Don't stop

can't wait til the next chapter is ready

Thanks, Great work. Keep it up.

post the next chapter, please!!! i'm getting desperate!!!

I'll be right home dear, so I can start dinner, and then fuck my entire family for a really long time...and then...bake a batch of chocolate chip cookies maybe? Oh decisions, decisions...Is there really more of this story cumming? Shit!

please give us more and more. It is the best series ever. Please consider involving some drastic changes to Kate's appearance. Hair / Piercings / Tattoos etc. She could have a relationship with the barber (A men's barber who cuts Jason's hair)

This is the best story I have read on here, keep it up. Can't wait to find out what happens next

PLEASE GIVE US MORE INTENSE FAMILY LOVE SCENES, I WANT TO SEE DAD AND BRO FUCK DAUGHTER, WHY SHOULD MOM BE THE ONLY ONE TO HAVE ALL THE FUN??

OMG it is past time for the next chapter please

Since I don't have a name to leave or an email account to comment, and as I think I am probably one of the most negative critics that I see on this board, I am going to start leaving a unique identifier. "BRB"

That said, OUTSTANDING. There are some serious grammar errors that are quite consistent with your writing and I worry that you are translating someone else's work into English, but I must say the author here has a clear understanding of how a lesbian thinks and how a man feels.

Now for the negatives. You have a habit of misspelling the same words over and over again and it is distracting. Exiting ==> Exciting. You also like to write for length. The legend says Shakespeare was paid by the word and I fear you have learned something from this. While most of your words are worthwhile, you go through inordinate effort to describe things that are clear and in the process tend to contradict a description you made a few paragraphs ago. Other times, your story gets a little lost in the detail. I would criticize this last part but I perceive you are embarking on new territory and cannot quite determine the propriety of the new path. So I forgive it.

Long story short, since my personal sexual interest will arrive shortly, please be advised that if you did indeed write these chapters that you are ready to approach a professional editor because there are plenty of reputable publishers who would be blessed to have your talents on their team.

please write more... incluse a mega gang bang.. let the hispanic men hav sum fun!!

please finish the story. make a chapter where she takes the blindfold off of her husband so he can see his daughter sucking his cock.

I really enjoy your writing style, please continue, it's really getting good!

That was the best story I ever read on this site, really. Please continue and finish it in a very good way.

The series turned to crap in chapter 5, the rest was just too boring. The author trying to cram in as many different things as he could in a single story setting.

its a shame to see this come to an end i was really enjoying it

What amazes me is how you keep coming back with the eroticism in each and every chapter. I'm simply fascinated by the way you write and continually put a new twist in each chapter most every time. I usually cannot get through reading one of the stories without it resulting in my own satisfaction through masturbation. With that said, I hope you continue the series and I would be most happy to help edit and proof read if needed.

i loved it all. you can do one were dad has sex with little gril.

Maybe the boys couldve fucked her. I LIKED the story just wish it was a little more risky. Maybe tim could have helped lick jasons cum off the moms face.

As a previous comment said, I couldn't believe at how you came back with such eroticism in every chapter- you kept it crazy except for a few parts. Loved the whole series- couldn't stop reading each one.

it HAS to be time for the next chapter in this series

That said, I am so loving this entire series! I don't believe I've made it through a single chapter without cumming at least once! You are truly an exceptional author! Keep 'em cumming!!!

Waiting with baited breathe for the next installment!

Please hurry and write more...the suspense is killing me. Interested in you following up on Adam.

Please keep the stories CUMMING

This is without a doubt the sexyist series ever. I have read this five times and I cum harder every time. WOW.

Just like the other comments, I can only hope that you will continue this at some point. You've written wonderfully erotic stories on their own. But you've also set up so many possibilities for more. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

Anyone know stories like these with incest/mothers/non reluctance specifically falling only those categories? I am dying to know!

Dear friend... it has been a year since the previous installment and we all check back often, dutifully. Is there more to the story?

HAD TO RE-READ THIS CHAPTER TO CATCH UP ON THE STORY BEFORE GOING ON TO THE NEXT. YOU MIGHT SAY I DOUBLED THE PLEASURE. GREAT TO SEE A NEW CHAPTER!

wen's the next story coming up??

I can't wait!!!!

i can't tell you how excited your stories make me. too bad kate had to leave her son's friends so soon.

this story between kate, jason and tim is so fucking hot!!! it could become its own story.

Not a big fan of these extraneous episodes with these other boys....

door bell (doorbell) (2)

tea shirt (T-shirt) (2)

eye full (eyeful) (2)

construction of the pool has started (had)

Forman (foreman)

DIRECTING everyone like a concert DIRECTOR (WAS HE DIRECTING WITH DIRECT DIRECTIONS DIRECTED AT HIS EMPLOYEES????)

short mini skirt (NOT A TALL ONE????)

large hole already dug in the yard (WOULD SHE HAVE TO GET OVER A LARGE HOLE THAT WAS NOT DUG????)

bobcat (Bobcat) (2)

Gardenias (gardenias)

eye sore (eyesore)

back yard (backyard)

lap top (laptop) (6)

half naked (half-naked)

make up (make-up) (2)

back drop (backdrop)

quite (quiet)

naval (navel)

self control (self-control)

un-lady like (unladylike) (2)

loosing (losing)

total control (control totally)

like (a) porn star

half way (halfway)

sprealled across his chest (sprawled)

semi soft (semi-soft)

Kate is one hot slutty lady. She stay hot the hole time. I wish I could be as lucky as she was and but, be able to stay in control. Maybe if I was as sexy as she is. I am tall c-cups but, mine sag some after two kids feeding in them when they were babies. Now just me and my husband play time is great for now but, we are both in our 40s now.

So fking hot.. Need a slut wife!

Stroke story. While the sex scenes are hot, the missed punctuation, words in the wrong tense, misspelling, and other errors detract too much from the story. 3⭐