by Lia Monde
Well done!
A nice build-up and then a lot of very vivid sex. Just a real nice slutty story, and I would love to read more of him and his aunt.
A nice writing style that gives the reader a good image of the scene.
Thanks for the good read
But hogs don't sweat... that's why they wallow in the mud.
Authentically low rent seduction. Breaking taboo barriers with a realistic feel. Happy trailer trash romp.
Great dialogue. Squeals for a sequel.
I hate when people start the fucking part and just end it,none of these dam stories ever finish what they started.
Your story shows an enviable knowledge of the location. You have succeeded in painting a very natural situation, well described, which should appeal to many. A very sexual event that could be written, dare one say, from personal experience. It doesn't have the ring of pure fiction.
I really liked that slutty big boobed aunt character! I want her! So slutty and inviting!
I thoroughly enjoyed this...sounds like he's got an eager Auntie who wants to continue on. Ahh...to be THAT young and virile again...
Down on the farm,plantin' the seed fuckin' at its finest!
This hotly described fuck fest deserves several sequels!
In the next chapter he can send his big cum wagon through her mountains ending up by white-washing her face.
Then in chapter 3 he can unleash his big rig down her Hershey highway and deposit some white icing.
Finally,in the Grand Finale,they can commence to Makin' some bacon with the end result being 3 little pigs 9 months later.
As Auntie Piglet said herself,"There's nothin' wrong with plowin' the family fields every now and again!"
The dialogue was really good, especially at the end. Way to build that sexual tension!
Great story with awesome dialogue. Need to check out more of your work. Well done.