All Comments on 'Small Town Secrets'

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42154215almost 7 years ago
Memories

A story which brought back memories of post war ' brothers or sisters ' sharing a house or the lodger ' renting ' a spare room in a widows home when men were in short supply. Sympathetically written , well done !!

Randee2058Randee2058almost 7 years ago
Gentleness.

Firstly. I loved the story. And I am not known to participate in criticizing grammar. And yet I'm not sure you realized the difference referred to. As Donnas street. Donna said that the street or alley was called DAMNATION ALLEY. You later refer to it as DESOLATION ROAD. After that's said I was disappointed that it ended because it definitely was a feel good story. THANK YOU.

5🌟's

dirtyricekingdirtyricekingalmost 7 years ago
Great story

Please right a sequel

me_ronme_ronalmost 7 years ago
lovely story

Can't wait to read part 2 ... (DaDoRonRon57@gmail.com)

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 7 years ago
5 stars

This is a very good love story, I hated to see it end with only 2 pages but it was short and very sweet

EclecticReaderEclecticReaderalmost 7 years ago

The previous comments say everything I intended to say. Thanks for sharing..

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
FUN READ

Thanks for sharing

MaonaighMaonaighalmost 7 years ago
A delight

An enjoyable, unpretentious story with a completely plausible May/September romance. An absolute delight.

ausfetausfetalmost 7 years ago

Sweet, sensual, perfect.

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