All Comments on 'Smaller than Average Ch. 02'

I think the story is good, I read part one and I like where this built from it. But, take a little more time editing and proof reading. Keep it up!

You have an interesting perspective and good imagination. Should not get too carried away with stories. The experiences and realistic feelings and reactions will be excellent. Some women do really appreciate cute little ones.

Amazing story a bit unnecessary with the additional roommate but i still loved the humiliation from the new characters and how he thought he had the upper hand then they how they made fun of him because they couldn't feel him enter after the large strap-on. Would love to see him get taken by the girls wearing a strap-on, or be cuckolded and eating creampies. But anyway you take the story i will be sure to read. Please produce another part

You write very good SPH stories like someone who knows from experience rather than imagination. My only criticism of your story is that your grammar is atrocious. I suggest if you are not going to take the time to improve this aspect yourself then submit your stories to one of the sites editors first, so they can correct it for you before you submit it for publishing. Otherwise keep writing as you have a very readable style

I really enjoyed this, a bit of size teasing but everyone has their fun. Not mean-spirited like some other sph.

This is likely the best story, as far as ideas go, I have read on here. Many twists and turns, the penis envy of bigger cocks, even the shower scene, incredible and interesting. I'm only sad that it seems you stopped writing :/ I've read all your stories now and I've loved them. Thank you.

"supper excited" Is that someone who's anxious to eat dinner? I could give more examples, but the point is, please proofread, or find someone to do it for you. The mistakes, punctuation errors, etc were distracting from your story.

I lost all respect for Amy to be perfectly honest.