All Comments on 'Smita's Life Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very good story

i like this story plz contiune another part

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
but... but what about Dhondu?

Loved your story but what about Dhondu? Please don't leave us hanging...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Good one

Loved the way you write sounds so life like.Did Smita have an incestuous past toooo......?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
good writer

You are writing good. Add more spice like cuckolding and husband hulimation etc.

atul_atsatul_atsalmost 11 years ago
nice stories

Have not seen too many Indian writers with such flair. Waiting to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Mast. !!!

Pan remarkable phase wali katha jast changli hoti

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
pls write next part explaining how it started with dhondu.

pls write next part explaining how it started with dhondu.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Smita should become dondhu 2nd wife. She must provide him everything and he can give her full satisfaction and children.

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