All Comments on 'Smitten Kitten'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great read

liked it a lot. Beeing a collector of strays myself I know about the joys and sometimes sadness you can experience. If you decide to do an encore I would be delighted. Keep it up!

0649d0649dover 13 years ago
didn't like this so much

It would have been okay until the sexual frenzy that seems to only get worse. Too much sexual frenzy with other men can only be a bad thing because then you lose love; you say it's love but it really is not. Some parts were interesting; the suggestion of a former wife, and the industrial espionage most notably. Maybe I am just disappointed because the girl is a whore .. and she was abused by her mother who was a whore, so why did she become a whore?? And on top of that, your stories have whores as good characters and bad characters. I can't differentiate between one whore and another - they are both crazy and eventually will become disloyal

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Great story

Thought it would be short, but vry much worth th read. This is a keeper and definitely woll be re-read. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Hot!

Very hot story! A sequel would have been nice.

SoCaNoCaSoCaNoCaover 6 years ago
Some sailor shit

Don't flush the head/holding tank until you have retrieved the sea anchor

Hehehehe

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