All Comments on 'Smoke Ch. 01'

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Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

She cheats and neglects her husband

And somehow it gets twisted around so it's the husband's fault.

Poor neglected girl.

hodunk almost 13 years ago

Great First Chapter !

Love the story, great first chapter. More please.

BigJohn601 almost 13 years ago

Great start...you've got my attention.

I love your stories and can't wait for the next one. I usually have no sympathy for women who cheat but Cindy has mine. Greg sounds like the kind of man she needs.

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