All Comments on 'Smoke Ch. 02'

This works for me, I love this story. I need more!

out standing story pure genius writing. reading this was fantastic . your one awesome writer. love your stories. they dont come much better. im a real fan you sold me now all i want is more please more, my lady.

Great story so far and can't wait for the next installment. Now is it Cindy's mom or grandmother along for the ride?

Cindy's husband was abusive and hit her and useless as a man, both in and out of the bedroom. While her frustrations were taken out in the parking lot, it's true, that was more Suzy's doing than anything else breaking her down. Read carefully and you'll see how long it had been since she had a good time in the bedroom.

Her husband is gone, found floating in the canal. What is she supposed to do? She's a widow, now and seeking someone to protect her. Is she pure? Of course not. Is she somewhat of a gold digger now? Probably for the small-town girl is dead and buried. Will she stay with Greg? I don't know but maybe, maybe not. It all depends on where calibeachgirl wants to take this...