All Comments on 'Snaked on Anjajavy Beach'

Great story as always. I very much enjoyed the exotic setting and the tattoo added an element of fantasy that is extremely arousing to read!

This is a kinder, gentler version of an earlier story. I prefer the emotional complexity of the first one, and am wondering why you toned it down.

This story is from a segment of a coauthored story (with Sabb as Shabbu) and was augmented. It's a relook at that segment of the scenario with no intent to either change or remain faithful to the original look and was originally reworked for a habu anthology on tales from the Tropic zones.