All Comments on 'Snapchat'

First off it's a fine story. Could use more detail and more of a build up to the main event. Also you changed the bothers name to the ex bf name at the end there. Keep it up

The concept of the story was great, but like the previous comment said, the story needs more detail and build up. Otherwise, it comes off as rushed. Keep writing, hope to see more from you

I can only hope it is true. I snap with my brother regularly