All Comments on 'Snapshots from The Life of a Submissive'

And an interesting start,hopefully you will write more about his progress/descent

This definately has the makings of a great story. The setup for a plotline just makes me want you to continue this. Few grammatical errors, but nothing that detracts from the story itself.

I hope there will be more to come. Thank you - this was a fine piece of work.

Goodness what was wonderful to read this fine afternoon...

superb start, it can go anywhere form here, please let the story flow

Got me wet!