All Comments on 'Snippets - David'

It may not be the most erotic story ever told but it is certainly the best written story that I have ever read in my many years on this site . If this is your own work , you are surely gifted .

This was an awesome addition to the series and I'm looking forward to Beths story and how that one plays out, I have a feeling it will be even hotter than this.

any writer with atleast half a brain knows that you NEVER give the chapters of a series different titles. if this is a continuation of a previous story then it HAS to have the same title. get a good editor and do a rewrite and title them properly.

DBRS

You're not an idiot! The complete series - snippets - clear, understandable and very good!

So it's been a fair few years since any comments on this story, but again it was a good read.

Will you bring Susan back to us for more loving, and with the way this ended there must be more.