All Comments on 'Snow-borne'

5* This story had a different feel to it than many of the stories you've posted, and I say its a very nice departure from your normal stories, I also like how it is complete in and of itself. I've read all your stories posted here on Lit and watch for updates on them at least weekly. So, even though I've never 'actually' said it before: "Great job. Thank you, again!"

Finalstand,

I loved it in conception and continue to love it now.

I agree with the previous comment.

As usual Good Job!

and your thanks are more than enough to make it worth my while.

Parts of this were all but impossible to read - the last half of the second page reads like your original words accidentally fell into a food processor and got all mixed up.

There's probably a half-decent story in here somewhere, so perhaps try working with one of Lit's volunteer editors next time. (Maybe even get this one fixed up and resubmitted)

xx

...then I read your bio, so apologies for the comments below. (But, honestly, very tough, very rough reading!)

I likes it ! This wasn't what I expected at all , I really liked it ! Parts kept me laughing , even the shoot out wasn't the way I expected it to end . Great story really off the wall .

Thanks

Tx Cracker

Loved your story.

Interesting story with likeable characters.

Great combination of adventure, suspense and the bad guys LOOSE !

VERY ENJOYABLE !

THANKS !

Yep !

I thoroughly enjoyed your creation !

THANKS !