All Comments on 'Snow Day: Story 03'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
a damn good well written story

I really enjoyed reading your story, "Snow Day" and thought it was a warm,sexy and loving look into the lives of two good people. Thanks for the nice feeling it left me with... Rich

chargergirlchargergirlover 15 years ago
awwww,,,,

Nice story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Nice!

I liked it. Straightforward and quite pleasant.

-- KK in Texas

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Sensational !

You told it beautifully and without exageration . I really enjoyed it . Please continue with this story .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
continue

you really need to continue your story "SNOW DAY:STORY 03" it is very good but leaves a lot unsaid and unfinished like do the parents find out do they continue fucking does she get pregnant do they move out and live together or do they never fuck again we need to know soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
you wasted our time

you wasted our time on an unfinished story. go back and finish it what happens now? do the parents find out if so how do they react? does she get pregnant? do they keep fucking or was it a one time deal? do they move out and live together? you left an awful lot unsaid time to get your lazy ass in gear and finish it now.

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I'll be 60 next year, and I've been writing for a long time. It wasn't until recently that I've started to try to write for publication. I currently have about 45 stories, most of which are unfinished, and a few of which that are over 600 pages long and still aren't finishe...

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