All Comments on 'Snow Interlude'

How do you think of these? These stories are amazing. I love every bit of them.

-Songbird

You clearly know the secret to writing good erotica is details. My only critique and this is going by what I like .... I think it should have been dirtier... more agressive and meaner. But overall well done :))

Your sentences need to be longer and always make sure you're completing the sentences. Fragments throw me off so bad it's hard for me to continue reading. I think having someone read your story first would help a lot. You gave great content 👍🏻