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bawsweatbawsweatover 7 years ago
Uneven

Nice story, but uneven. Nice use of language in one paragraph, then rubbish in the next.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
So much buildup...

There was alot of good, descriptive buildup, but once it got to the actual sex act, it lasted for four sentances. Disappointing.

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